- Background : This section describes the situation;
e.g.:-I am writing to inform you that the goods we ordered from your company have not been supplied correctly.
- Problem - cause and effect
Example letters
Fortune Goods317 Orchard Road Singapore - 30 September 2013
Attn:
Mr David Choi
Sales Manager
Everlong Batteries
171 Choi Hung Road
Hung Hom
Hong Kong
Dear Mr Choi
Re. Order No. 768197
I am writing to inform you that the goods we ordered from your company
have not been supplied correctly.
On
24 September 2013
we placed an order with your firm for 12,000 ultra super long-life
batteries. The consignment arrived yesterday but contained only 1,200
batteries.
This error put our firm in a difficult position, as we had to make some
emergency purchases to fulfil our commitments to all our customers. This
caused us considerable inconvenience.
I am writing to ask you to please make up the shortfall immediately and to
ensure that such errors do not happen again. Otherwise, we may have to
look elsewhere for our supplies.
I look forward to hearing from you by return.
Yours sincerely
J. Wong
J. Wong
Purchasing Officer
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